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COOL, firm handshake or a big wet kiss accompanied by a bum tweak? Either introduction would be remembered at head office, but only one in a good way. And it’s much the same with covering letters. Here’s how to say “choose me” without leaving your DNA behind.
1. First impressions count. “A covering letter is read before a CV, so make sure that it grabs the reader’s attention,” says Paul Laurie, the operations manager at the employment consultancy Manpower UK. Sloppy spelling and punctuation, copying a generic e-mail to rival firms, forgetting to include your contact details and omitting a job reference are all common, fall-at-the first-fence bloopers.
2. It’s not an optional extra. “Even if you have just been asked to e-mail your CV, always send a covering letter,” says Scott Foley, the student recruitment manager at Manchester University. “It introduces why your CV is there and what you stand for. It sets the scene for your CV.”
3. Dear who? If the job advertisement doesn’t name a contact, call human resources to find out who will be scrutinising your application. “It’s more personal, and if you want to inquire about the application process (later) you have someone to follow up with,” Foley says.
4. Be brief. “Keep it punchy,” Laurie says. Three or four paragraphs should be sufficient to convey your motivation, experience and personality. A covering letter should not replace your CV but summarise your suitability for a role by matching your experience to the job advertised.
5. Be factual not arrogant. Don’t cross that fine line between expert and muppet. “There is selling yourself and then highlighting what you have done,” Laurie says. Avoid statements such as “I am the ideal candidate” for example, in favour of “I believe I have the skills and experience that make me a strong candidate”.
6. Get noticed. “Give a reason for writing,” says Lynn Williams, a career coach, even if your application is speculative. Perhaps you recently read something in the trade press or met someone from the firm at a networking event? “It shows that you have been actively looking at the company,” Williams says. If you are applying for a specific role, say so at the start of your letter so that the application doesn’t go astray.
7. Tailor your letter. Recruiters are impressed by evidence of research into their company’s goals, ethos and achievements, Laurie says. If the company prizes customer service, show that you have delivered excellent client care, but don’t go overboard. One such statement suggesting spiritual kinship is enough.
8. Be e-mail aware. Writing a good e-mail requires just as much patience as a legible handwritten letter. “Make sure that the key bullet points are in the first screen, so that you don’t have to scroll down,” Williams says. “You can also use the subject line to put your key point forward. Say ‘engineering graduate’ for example.”
9. No ifs or buts. Don’t point out any weaknesses and then attempt to justify yourself. As Williams says: “You are giving them reasons to interview you, not excuses to bin you.”
10. Sign off with confidence. Be upbeat and ask for an interview, Foley
says. “I’ll expect your call” sounds overly confident but write that you
expect to meet to discuss the role.
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True, although it's more common to write on paper than 'wright' surely?
Pete, Portsmouth, UK
lol to all of you. not all young people use text abbreviations. and wrighting on good quality paper is what a lot of us do as well. also if people would just use a dictionary then there would be no need for spell check...
thais, Brighton, england,
I always thought the zee's or zed's were American. Optimise / optimize and so on. Is it reall the case that ess's come from France?
Richard, Bristol, UK
I like to send in a covering letter and CV in the post on good quality thick paper in an A4 envelope with a paperclip attaching the two pages of my CV together, not stapled!
Call me old fashined but I think this kind of application makes me stand out from the millions of emails they'll get.
Alice, Leeds,
I find it so funny when the English get their knickers in a twist because a word has a different letter then they are used to or words like cafeteria instead of canteen etc. given the number of languages they decimated and the lack of respect they show towards native languages e.g. welsh.
Grace, warrington,
Organization is a British spelling (it appears as such in the OED). Organisation is a French-influenced spelling that just happens to have become more popular in recent years. Don't feel bad, not a lot of people know this.
R F, London, UK
Spell check, whilst a useful tool, is probably responsible for the proliferation of misspelt English words in the UK, by default it is set to US-English,(it should be called American!), unfortunately Americans have bastardised English spelling, so you end up with those annoying and incorrect spellings such as organization, color, instead of organisation and colour. I suppose however the Americanisation of our spelling will be much acceptable to an employer than the current 'text speak' most of young people use today.... coz it mk u luk kool innit!
Les, Southort , England (a country, not a state!)
MIHIR, that's great spelling and grammar. I hope you have used spellcheck in your CV and covering letter.
Mark, Hertford, England
actually i like ur suggestions about cv and covring letter those very excellent i want some suggestion from the professional of Pricewaterhouse coopers company so, that make me strong more..... thanx
MIHIR, uxbridge, uk